Rain Dust

Rain Dust
How about this poem "Rain" I just wrote?

"Rain" The rain washes the dust tired in my window. The sound of raindrops encouraged my cat to enjoy getting wet He looks shy to ask where they come from. and my heart begins to sing traced the path of the drops rain

Self as a dog, but prefers to stay dry longer. You seem to have talent. Do not stop writing. Good luck.

Wolf’s Rain — Dust In The Wind